Revision Plan

Revision Plan

After reviewing my paper with Jack Moore he pointed out several areas where I can improve my narrative. Some of those areas include restructuring my paragraphs in chronological order to make the writing flow and sound better to the reader. Another area that I can improve in is my tenses when writing. Jack pointed out that I need to write this entire narrative in past tense instead of going back

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